a pen spillage….

September 27th, 2002

so today in class, i suddenly had the urge to write something. keep in mind that ‘m not a writer. i do’t think ‘ve ever been really good at writing, (i do’t think i ever gotten good grades in english either… *shrugs*) but years ago i liked to write poetry. i stopped for years. and then today, i wrote this…. kind of a start to a poem or a song. it may not be that good, but give me some feedback on these first 8 lines i jotted down….

i see people every day
looking at the ground they walk

keep your head up
Christ is the solid rock.

unmoving, unchanging
the beginning and the end

the absolute truth
my God, my savior and friend.

5 Responses to “a pen spillage….”

  1. donaville says:

    good rhyme scheme =) and it is indeed uplifting.

  2. iris says:

    aw *claps* bravo! 🙂

  3. jules says:

    yeah ‘d like to see more! go traydogg

  4. Matt says:

    Not a writer?

    Then what is this web page I read?

    Do’t you write all these entries?

    Just because you do’t do well in english class does’t mean yo’re not a writer. You write a lot. Give yourself a little credit. 🙂

  5. tray says:

    heh. thanks guys. and yea. i see your point matt. very true. 🙂

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